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Diary entries based on the short film ‘The Way Back Home’

Diary entries based on the short film ‘The Way Back Home’

Key Stage One did some great writing this week based on a short film called ‘The Way Back Home’.

Here are some examples:

 

Dear diary,

Guess what I decided to do today?  I got my special spaceship and set off to space but I crashed my rocket into the moon!  I met a friendly, kind alien.  He had crashed his spaceship on the moon too.  I was thinking about what to do.  I thought that if I made a parachute I could fly down, get a ladder and get stuff to help him.  So I did.  I fixed his spaceship and he said thank you.

Yasmin Y2

 

Dear diary,

You won’t believe what happened today.  I went to the moon. Then I met a friendly alien.  Our spaceships ran out of petrol.  I took a parachute and then I got a ladder.  Then I fixed our spaceships.

 

Ashton Y1